Looking beyond
she floats
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Looking beyond
she floats
through horizon unknown
searching for
moments unlived
calls unanswered
promises not made
The emptiness
the longingness
take her
through misty vastness
to the lands of stars
the world of dreams
She strives
to break
shackles of life
and fly
to be with
the one snatched away
to be with herself
she yearns.......... Close
thanks ananda
ya we r meeting for the first time .i m so happy that u wrote now we shall be in touch.
i loved your writing in hindi .today only i shall be going through your blog.
namitha
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Namitha madam,
Superb poem! supeb! Iam seeing you in Sulekha pahli bar.muje aap ko blogs dekna chaiye.Good Luck.
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thanks nupur ....its pleasent to find u here.your encouraging words matters a lot....
sometimes the emptiness ,the void weigh heavily ,even though we r unable to pin point the cause.....
namita
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thanks
ehsaas
namita
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Namita.
I loved the way you spun this yarn ..of longing.
the empty spaces of heart and life came through very well.
keep write
Nupur
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hi sampath
that's why i wait for your visit on my page .your comments itself are akin to a good writeup 'to discover the moreness of yourself ,is the call of being ' ...that's the essence .i could have never framed it so beautifully .
namita
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hi sue
thanks .your comments matter a lot .
namita
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hi supriyad ,nice meeting u .thanks for coming and encouraging
namita
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Hey Namita :) That was nice. Thanks for sharing :)
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Namita,
A beautiful poem. Liked it very much.
Sue
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