बंद आंखो की चौखट पर
दस्तक देते सपनों में
उठते हैं बवंडर
अत्रिप्त कामनाओं के
चुभते हैं शूल
अव्यक्त् व्यथायों के
या फ़िर
निकलते हैं उच्छवास
ना जाने कितने ’काश’
तले उपजी
रंगीन सम्भावनाओं के
पर
मेरे सपने
ना तिरते हैं
आकाश में
ना पलते हैं
छितिज की कोख में
वो तो
पनपते हैं
चेतना की माटी
और स्वस्थ सोच मे
वास्तविकता की पथरीली ज़मी पर
नंगी सच्चाइयों की
आंखो में आखें डाल
छैलते ही जाते हैं
मेरे सपने
एक आंख से दूसरी आंख
एक मन से दूसरे मन .
रास्ते के दर्द
परिणाम का भय
कोई नहीं रोक सकता
उनके बढते कदम
उनकी जड़ो को है
मेरी अडिग आस्थाओं
औ चट्टानी विश्वासों का सम्बल
कैसे ,भला कैसे
बांध सकता है उन्हें
बंद आंखो के
छलावों का सम्मोहन.
मेरे सपने तो हैं
अन्गिनित आकाशी आंखो मे रौशन
और
मेरी अपनी खुली आंखो को
तो है ही
सपनों की आदत
आदत
या लत . Close
Namita,
I delight in hindi kavita. while searching for hindi poems, I came across your poems and read one after another and liked them all. You are a very good poet. I shall try to continue readind your blogs.
Good wishes!
rcsood
shootradhar ji
bahut bahut dhanyawad .aapke comments bahut mayne rakhate hai kyonki ye khud achha likhne wale ki kalam se nikle hote hai .aur hame ummed hai ki jab bhi agar kuchh achchha nahi ban padega to aap hame avashya guide karege .
aapne itni vyastata ke bavzood ke bad meri kavita padane ka samay nikala isake liye ham tahedil se shukragujar hai
ek kahani ghoom rahi hai dimag me thodi lambi ho jayegi shayad par jaldi hi kuchh karana padega uska varna pareshan kar rahi hai andar hi andar
namita
Main Bata nahi saqta ki mujhe kitani khushi ho rahi hai ....Itani Achi kawita Sulekha par Dekh kar...Mujhe koi Ek Pera nahi mil raha hai quote karne ke liye...Poori ki poori kawita hi Ek 'Aasha wadi' soch khoobsoorat namoona hai....Maine Aap ki Kahani main bahut Sambhawanayain dekhi thi Lekin...Aap kawita bhi bakhoobi Likh rahi ho.... Kisi Bhi Kasauti par khari utarne-waali kawita....!
Mujhe khed hai ki Samay ke abhaw ki wajah se der se padh paaya !
thanks gajanan
i m so happy that u liked it .u know one of the purposes of creativity is to leave certain thought processes ,beliefs for youngsters .when those perceptions and beliefs r understood by them one feels a kind of satisfaction . u provided me that satisfaction
namita
lat lagi rahegi aur koshish rahegi ki kuchh aur aankho ko yah lat laga paaye ....virasat me sapne saup paye to achha rahega na .....
thanks for liking it
namita
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thank u sood ji ....its encouragement like this which propels me to do better .i shall try my best not to disappoint an ardent reader like u
namita
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Namita,
I delight in hindi kavita. while searching for hindi poems, I came across your poems and read one after another and liked them all. You are a very good poet. I shall try to continue readind your blogs.
Good wishes!
rcsood
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sood ji
aapka comment itani purani post par pa kar ham anugrahit anubhav kar rahe hai .
aapne rachna ko khoj kar padha iske liye atishay dhanyawad .
namita
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Bahut hi sunder kavita hai " khuli aankhon ke sapne"
rcsood
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shootradhar ji
bahut bahut dhanyawad .aapke comments bahut mayne rakhate hai kyonki ye khud achha likhne wale ki kalam se nikle hote hai .aur hame ummed hai ki jab bhi agar kuchh achchha nahi ban padega to aap hame avashya guide karege .
aapne itni vyastata ke bavzood ke bad meri kavita padane ka samay nikala isake liye ham tahedil se shukragujar hai
ek kahani ghoom rahi hai dimag me thodi lambi ho jayegi shayad par jaldi hi kuchh karana padega uska varna pareshan kar rahi hai andar hi andar
namita
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Namita...
Main Bata nahi saqta ki mujhe kitani khushi ho rahi hai ....Itani Achi kawita Sulekha par Dekh kar...Mujhe koi Ek Pera nahi mil raha hai quote karne ke liye...Poori ki poori kawita hi Ek 'Aasha wadi' soch khoobsoorat namoona hai....Maine Aap ki Kahani main bahut Sambhawanayain dekhi thi Lekin...Aap kawita bhi bakhoobi Likh rahi ho....
Kisi Bhi Kasauti par khari utarne-waali kawita....!
Mujhe khed hai ki Samay ke abhaw ki wajah se der se padh paaya !
Bahut-bahut badhai Ek sundar rachana ke liye !
Sootradhaar !
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thanks gajanan
i m so happy that u liked it .u know one of the purposes of creativity is to leave certain thought processes ,beliefs for youngsters .when those perceptions and beliefs r understood by them one feels a kind of satisfaction . u provided me that satisfaction
namita
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wah!
your perception has stunned me
wah1
gajanan(nanagaja)
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lat lagi rahegi aur koshish rahegi ki kuchh aur aankho ko yah lat laga paaye ....virasat me sapne saup paye to achha rahega na .....
thanks for liking it
namita
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thanks rahul for coming and appreciating
namita
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